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Striking out on the Batting Tee: A Life in Practice


That first year girls got the nod of permit,
I played so badly it was cool,
my eye trained over the elusive fruit
or under its spherical rule.
Again and again I chopped at the tee,
making training league history – the first
first-grader to strike out on a gimme.
On the team I was happily the worst.
My mother insisted I quit.
My father promised an ice cream cone
for each base gained. What triumph under a hat
like a palm, on one bald field. Now grown,
I cling to my legacy of distress:
Failed at a uniform, more failed at a dress.

By Jen Karetnick

Originally published in Gulf Stream Review. Collected in Eve and After, ©2007 by Jen Karetnick. Please request permission before copying or distributing.
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